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Monday, March 23, 2015

Remedy

Wander in and out
Wander all about
Searching without clue
Reason evades
through and through
Falling into minds trap
gathering memories scrap
Many good times
that never knew
Loved ones poisoned
by thoughts askew
Personality tarnished
Scar marked pain
Live in this world
done in vein.

Struggle forward
proceed with life
Always fighting
might and strife
Healing rains
come one day
Yet first the will
to make the way.

Alright this was from something I had not completed from long ago so I just had a depressing little scribble in front of me.  I revised this because it seemed suicidal to be honest and I strongly believe in fighting for happiness and life.  I know first hand that suicide is one of the world's greatest tragedies as I lost my best friend to mental illness.  If you need help call 1 (800) 273-8255 National Suicide Prevention Lifeline.  Make a call make a difference.

The title "Remedy" is in reference to having the power of mind to see tough times through.  This will obviously need further revisions.  Please follow back to see this poems transformation.

2 comments:

  1. We must all make way and it's never comfortable.

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    1. Thank you. I agree, the discomfort is what makes it worthwhile most of the time.

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