Once Friends

It's beautiful I'm for real.  Bodies broken mind's a smokin' but you on my arm is what I feel.

Last night may have been dumb with some fun but now I know you are the one.  Long time friends but you've always meant more so I gotta let you know you're who my heart's for.

So don't get at me, I am so happy.  Let this moment be because when you awaken my heart can't take a potential breakin'.

It's beautiful I'm for real.  Bodies broken mind's a smokin' but you on my arm is what I feel.

I am so hungover but I want this moment to last forever.  Between headache and heartbreak it's easy to choose which one's easier to suffer less a bruise.

I'm afraid of when you to wake up but I want to see into your eyes.  I just pray our love is what I see materialize.

It's beautiful I'm for real.  Bodies broken mind's a smokin' but you on my arm is what I feel.

Last night may have been dumb with some fun but now I know you are the one.  Long time friends but you've always meant more so I gotta let you know you're who my heart is for.

As we lie in bed I remember the things we said and last nights passion all the sensual action.  Best friends forever love just adds something better.

I hope you feel the same and don't think it's strange.  I hope to see you smile and hear you say "Good morning go ahead and stay a while."

It's beautiful I'm for real.  Bodies broken mind's a smokin' but you on my arm is what I feel.

Last night may have been dumb with some fun but now I know you are the one.  Long time friends but you've always meant more so I gotta let you know your who my heart is for.

When I wrote this I was really longing for the touch of my wife.  My brother and I had gone out the night before and I'd crashed at his house.  I very foolishly wrote this while I was driving home to her.  This is currently a rough draft.  The problem I have is that it seems familiar, almost like I heard it somewhere.   I did search for the chorus lines on google and was unable to find anything.  I'd really appreciate your comments on whether I should brush this up.  I look forward to hearing some advice.

Does it need to be longer?
Does the story make sense?