take me away
Prescribed relief of pain
an empty vessel
Temporary remedy
The doctor's duct tape
Every six hours
not a minute more
The addiction
led me to this new affliction
Now questioning the finality of this rest
Side effects
taking my own life no longer the best
in this fight
my mental vitality put to test
So I vomit time to clean up this mess.
Alright I got some criticism that the story of awakening my characters desire to want to live was not properly/fully told.
Rolling red bottle
take me away
Prescribed relief of pain
an empty vessel
Temporary remedy
The doctor's duct tape
Every six hours
not a minute more
The addiction
New affliction
No full nights rest
Side effects
taking my own life the best
in this fight
my mental vitality put to test
So I vomit time to clean up this mess.
The message in this poem is the thought my character has when hitting bottom, deciding not to give up.
in this fight
my mental vitality put to test
So I vomit time to clean up this mess.
The message in this poem is the thought my character has when hitting bottom, deciding not to give up.
I saw your message and enjoyed your acrostic George. Never give up!
ReplyDeleteLife is precious people must always have the strength to protect themselves from a moment of weakness.
DeleteGood felt emotion and message. All the best
ReplyDeleteThank you Wayne. I appreciate your visit.
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